Comment on How to Make THE Fluffiest Pancakes Ever by Kathy.
These pancakes look so yummy! I’ll have to try soon, pancakes are hubby’s favorite when he is hungry for something hot but quick! Thanks for sharing!
Recent Comments by Kathy
At the Water’s Edge – Chapter One
Love the first chapter of your book and look forward to reading the rest of your book. I would suggest that in the first paragraph the sentence “Frustrated, she walked to her window to gaze out of her bedroom window” be changed to “walk to her window to gaze out on the Lawn, Rose Garden, Back Patio,etc or else “walked across the room to gaze out her bedroom window”. Using the word window twice in this sentence is redundant. (Pardon me for this, I worked several years at a job where I had to format and edit company manuals, so I mean this only as a helpful suggestion).
Your blog awesome just like you, Barb.